Conclusion for Moving On leaves the readers with the impression that the man that choose her has some good qualities, he is forgiving, caring, and is ready to call her his new wife. It is stated that she isn’t ready to move on but was told that someday she will barely remember her first husband. The conclusion also makes us feel pity for her as she isn’t given a grieving period and is unsure when she will ever forget about him. I feel pity for her.

The Big Cat

Whoa its good to see that they made up with each other, however he stills has nightmares about his past and her snoring. The ending is confusing for me……

Valery parts helped the main characters to have a connection that eventually led to them getting back together.

Laurene was added in to cause conflict, it was good to have some drama.