kavitha and mustafa response

       

      Kavitha and Mustafa Intro Response:

          This introduction is a great build up for the for the rest of the story.  It definitely draws me in         and I can visualize the scene as if I had seen this in a popular movie.  Especially the description           and comparison of the room.  The rusty metal rails, the way the man held the ax.  The struggle for       life and the telling of desperation can be an instant eye catcher for me.  This Introduction unlike the title screams horror movie but with as much horror as there is in the beginning I can only guess that a hero will submerge toward the middle or soon