Introduction To Motherlode

Thomas Mcguane did a good job on this introduction, what he did was introduce the two main characters and then did a dramatic opening that pulled in the reader. i personally enjoyed this story normally it takes awhile for someone to get into a story but almost immediately you're drawn into this story. At first i thought it was exciting how hes being kidnapped at gunpoint so i became eager to read more, then i thought it was hilarious how rays behavior was so i was interested in how the stor would turn out.